Tag: Plot

Order! Order!

thestuartsadler

Good evening! I’m back again after having briefly forgotten I have a blog!

Anyway my latest writing woe is all down to the order of my chapters.

Now I know what you’re thinking. You’re thinking surely they just go in order, one after the other? And indeed I would agree with you. Except the way I am writing this particular novel (this is not to be read in any tone that would imply that I am at all familiar with writing novels, nor that I have written or am currently writing more than one!) it’s not quite that simple.

You see I am an ordered soul. I like things to be ordered. I like things to line up, to fit snugly, to create a pattern. This was the plan for my chapters. I have three protagonists, so it only made sense to me that I would dedicate a chapter to each of them in turn. First would come character A, then B, then C, then back to A and so on and so forth.

It worked well enough for a long time. Then I started noticing that a bit more was happening with one character than another, and I had less to write for character A than for character C at certain points. It wasn’t a huge problem at first, as I simply combined the next two chapters for character A into one (and at first draft I didn’t have to worry about fleshing anything out, it all seemed fine).

But then the timelines began to creep apart, but I figured I could deal with that fairly easily at second draft so I didn’t let it slow me down. But then I wrote myself into a corner. I finished character C on a cliffhanger that not only meant the start of the next chapter would continue immediately from that moment (I’d already had that occur but it was fine to leave them and come back after we’d spent time with the other characters), but really it needed to happen in the next chapter otherwise the marrying up of timelines would seriously begin to suffer.

So, I made the decision to scrap the ABCABC system and just write it as it needs to be written. This is both daunting because it means there’s no more ‘pattern’ for me to follow, which makes me uncomfortable, but also it feels quite liberating and I’m excited to get writing the next chapter (which I had planned to do this evening but it’s quite late and I’m tired so I realised it would be a good opportunity to fire off a quick blog post! Oh if only I could write my novel as quickly as I can write this!).

Fingers crossed when I get some people reading through it they don’t complain about the order of the chapters! If they do I might have to pull some hair out! Early feedback (merely of asking the question) indicates that it won’t bother people, so fingers crossed!

Hope your writing is going well!

You Can Go Your Own Way

thestuartsadler

Obligatory apology for it being so bloody long since I last posted anything. My excuse is that I’ve spent at least some of the time writing my novel instead so I think you’ll forgive me that!

Now, this blog is supposed to be about my experiences in writing, from a novice/amateur/whatever person’s point of view, and a few months ago I experienced something I had always been a little dubious of which I had planned to share with you long before now. But as I said, I got on with my writing (and the rest of life’s distractions) and the blog was left to gather dust.

Recently I’ve realised that in all those snippets of time I have sat in the kitchen with not quite enough time to really get my teeth into writing or practising the piano (another thing I always wanted to do but had always left for ‘later’) or any number of other things it feels like you have to set aside a good chunk of time for. In those moments I realised I could probably rattle off a blog post. I figure it’s better to post regularly, than have quarterly epics etc.

So I’m back with a post I’ve been meaning to write for ages and I think I’m repeating myself.

The thing I had always been dubious of was when I saw people say things like ‘Sometimes my characters surprise me’ or ‘I had this in mind, but my character decided to do such and such instead’.

I always thought ‘How can you not know what your character is going to do? It’s YOUR character, YOUR story.’ It never made sense to me that, if you had a story in mind, your characters would not follow that story, because otherwise what the hell was going on?

Such is the part of me that focuses on logic and order. How wrong that part of me was.

There I was writing away. My character was following the path I had outlined for him and things were going smoothly. He was supposed to be framed for stealing from a ship that he had worked on and, deciding he’d had enough of being treated like crap, leave and travel to another city where he would meet up with my other characters and the story would continue as planned. AS PLANNED.

Then it happened. My fingers were typing the word ‘stowaway’ and I realised that he’d decided he wasn’t going to leave for the city to meet my other characters, the cheeky bugger was going to set sail and end up on another continent. What the heck was happening?

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That was a few chapters ago and I’ve since planned a new path for both him and my other characters. One I’m happier with. I had always said about my outline that it was a roughly drawn map, and I was happy for my story to wind it’s way from start to end, so long as I knew basically where it was going. I never imagined my characters would end up forcing me to add other continents to that map, but perhaps that is a sign I am being more creative than I thought I could be, and I can definitely live with that.

The Here and Now

thestuartsadler

Hello again and welcome back.

How is your creative endeavour going? Mine is going pretty well thank you. Slowly, probably, compared to a lot of writers, but then I am not a full-time writer so I don’t have a fraction of the time I would like to dedicate to writing available to me, and of course being human, I only use a fraction of the time I do have available to actually write!

But it is going well! I have written eight chapters of my first draft and am in a good enough flow that the last two chapters have been written in just a couple of sittings each, so I am particularly pleased with that! And though I do claim not to write as much as I could, I am also prioritising it over a lot of other things! I’ve not played any PS4 games for months now and have probably halved the amount of TV I watch (which I don’t think was a lot anyway). My goal is to complete the first draft this year and I am really going to push myself to do it sooner than that.

But I thought it was also high time I wrote a blog post!

I originally started this blog to highlight the issues I came across whilst writing and recently I have identified something new that I am having difficulty with, which is what the title alludes to.

I’ve realised that the vast majority of what I write is what I suppose you would call ‘real-time’. I start a scene and write what happens to my character there and then until the scene is done. Then I will begin another scene and do the same. This might sound perfectly fine, but I realised that there are going to be times when I just want to describe general things going on, over a longer period of time, so writing in this style is not something that will work.

I’ve just finished reading A Wizard of Earthsea, the first book of the Earthsea series and I think Ursula K. Le Guin does what I am aiming to do perfectly. As I was reading it I realised that my interest was being held while the protagonist’s actions and life were, a lot of the time, being skimmed over. That is not to say that detail is missed, but that over perhaps two pages, the same number of days will have passed, and I will know everything I need to know about those two days.

This is something I think I struggle with. My worry is that without describing the immediate surroundings and actions of the characters, my writing will just read like a boring list of things that happened (‘John got up and had breakfast then went to the shops. When he got home he cooked dinner and sat down to watch some television, staying up late into the night.’ As an extremely bad example). I struggle to find the salient and interesting points in the overall story of the day or week that my character has lived, or at least I struggle to visualise how to write it in an interesting way.

It may be that I am focussing too much on two things: First is the narrative perspective of my story, and the worry that by stepping back in order to describe events that happen not in an immediate sense but an overarching one, the voice I use must be that of the narrator and less so the character, which may distance the reader and thus they will lose interest. The second is the idea that everything must serve a purpose for the story, that the writer should cut out everything that is unnecessary. In this sense a part of my mind says ‘well if you’re not going to go into detail about what John did on Tuesday, why write about it at all? Surely it will not add enough to the study to be worth mentioning?’ This is difficult to overcome, and as I’ve mentioned I therefore find it very difficult to write from such a perspective.

I am trying though and I know that the more I try, the more I will do it, and the more I do it the more I will improve. At least I hope so! I would be interested in hearing any tips of this that any of you might have!

Until next time! (Which I will try to make sooner!)

It’s A Kind of Magic

thestuartsadler

Hello again! I thought it was about time I wrote a post on my novel writing which, as mentioned previously, took a bit of a backward step a while ago when I decided that I had gone a bit overboard with background ideas that I quite literally lost the plot!

This weekend though I reached Chapter 40 in my outlining which I’m pleased with, and another positive is that I know its going somewhere and is close to a resolution! About ten chapters ago I started to wonder whether I would just end up planning chapter after chapter in a subconscious bid to avoid actually writing the novel, so it’s good to know that my brain is working with me on this one and that things are heading in a very definite direction!

Now, I think I made it clear in my initial post that I’m writing a fantasy novel, and in case I didn’t mention it, there’s going to be magic involved!

I knew there would be a few things to think about when developing magic within my story. I’d already decided I didn’t want spells, incantations and potions for example, preferring my characters to have a more innate ability than one that requires use of an object or words etc.

Still, that has not stopped me from obsessing over the details from time to time.

And it is precisely my obsession over something like magic that has me worrying I’m lacking in the imagination department too much to be a decent writer. You see, I’ve spent far too much time in all trying to figure out the actual physical possibilities of how my characters would perform magic. Magic! I’ve literally sat and questioned how they might produce light using magic. Literally how they might do it, how the magic would work, how the light would exist and what would be required to sustain it. And half the time when I respond to myself with ‘it’s magic, Stuart, that’s the whole point. It’s magic, and magic isn’t real which is why you can’t do it in real life so stop trying to figure out how and just make it interesting.’ the rest of me is thinking ‘Hmm I’m not sure that’s a good enough reason.’

It makes you wonder why I love fantasy so much, and why I would choose to write a genre that requires such suspension of belief and in the laws of physics and nature, and yet here I am! It just seems to be my default. Every idea I have cries out for an element of otherworldliness, of things beyond the human experience, so for now at least I’m just going with it!

I have my basic idea down as to how my magic exists, but I need to think a little harder on the cost and limitations my magic users might suffer so as to avoid any ‘deus ex machina’ level issues. I just need to make sure I don’t overthink it to the point where I make the magic either pointless, or too powerful!

So yes, another thing to add to the list of ‘gosh isn’t writing a story harder than it sounds?!’

Finally, I would love to hear from anyone else who has written magic into their story and the processes they went through to try to ensure they retained a level of realism that kept things interesting!

An update

thestuartsadler

Whoops! It’s been quite a while since I last wrote anything on this blog so my apologies if you have been kept waiting. Work has been busy, life has been fairly busy and I have at least been writing a thing or two, which is why I’m back here tonight. I wanted to do some writing but am too tired to focus on my story so I thought I’d write a blog post instead!

So I’ve done a quick check and the last time I was here I was talking about short stories and my novel somewhat getting away from me to the point where I needed to take a step back. That was a while ago, so here’s the latest!

That first short story was successfully entered and the result (or more accurately a shortlist) is due to be revealed this evening! I have been waiting and refreshing the page several times an hour all evening but alas at the time of writing there is no news yet! I’m not overly confident I’ll make the cut, but you never know! I wouldn’t have entered if I didn’t like my story so we shall see! It’ll be a nice surprise, but I’m not holding my breath!

The second short story (on the theme ‘Dark Matters’) was also finished and sent off, and I was pleased with that too! Unfortunately results aren’t due until January so you may have to remind me to check that one in the new year!

I drafted a third short story just the other night (an open themed competition for a story of ‘exactly 100 words’) which came out of nowhere and isn’t the kind of thing I would normally write so I’m quite pleased with that! After a couple more times staring at it making sure there’s no way I can make it any better (an extremely difficult task when knowing any changes must retain the exact word count!) I’ll be sending that off too! This competition is open till the end of January though so it’ll be a while for that one!

As for the novel, well I went back to basics for sure! I decided I needed more structure and a better idea where I was going, if only to keep myself in check as I write! So I have been chapter outlining. I’m up to about 35 chapters planned so far which I’m pleased with and it’s helped me cement my ideas and the story I want to tell. Of course when it comes time to actually write it (which I’m hoping will be relatively soon as I’m already starting to feel like a part of my brain is just sat in the back saying ‘Yeah, this is progress! Just keep outlining! Keep telling yourself you’re writing a novel, that’s it! Outline 100 chapters if you have to, it’s all progress!’ Which of course it is, and it isn’t. I am fully aware that I am still not writinga novel so yeah, needs work!) I will be happy for the characters to take me in unexpected directions etc. but the main thing is that I have a thread to follow and keep me grounded at least a little.

I’m hoping to write some more blog posts too though. In fact I’m hoping to just do more writing in general!

It’s all progress! 😉